Score: 5

"Ok, but needs work"

submission: fun love!

date: December 28, 2009

Ok since that this is your first flash I'll wont be as harsh, your animation style was good, but can be improved on, please stay away from the black background, and white animation, hurts the eyes. Another thing try and stabilizes your animation, it was a little bouncy in the beginning, and that was a little hard to follow. Also practice on lip syncing your animation to the music, if you intend the character in your flash to sing, it was just a little hard to follow with the music. Ok time for judgement.

Animation: 6 Yes I know that this is your first flash, and that there is room for improvement here.
Style: 4 Basic stick figure, but once you get better move away from that, a stick figure can only do so much in an animation.
SFX/Sound: 6 A little to loud, but that can be fixed, be sure to lower the volume just a little so that the viewer doesn't have to lower to volume on his/her speaker. Oh! By the way nice choice of song.
Overall: 5.3 Don't get discouraged you have a lot of room for improvement, since this is your first flash.

Score: 9

"Nice"

submission: Alien Monks

date: December 28, 2009

Ok well really I dont know what to say, for one it was short, to short. Another thing to me i thought that this was an intro to your flash, not the actually flash, next time if you happen to put a title animation into your animation, have it be distinguishable. Anyway time for judgement.

Animation: 9 I like the way that you used 3-D effect in your animation, it wasn't choppy or anything so very good.
Style: 9 Nothing new I'v seen 3-D flash before, but not as smooth as this one.
SFX/Sound: 9 I like the way that you incorporated the sound effects into the flash, next time add music.
Overall: 9

Score: 7

"Good Video"

submission: XMOS

date: December 28, 2009

I thought it was pretty good, the style was nothing new, seen it before with all the other psycho-acid trip music video. But I will give you a plus for making it into a Christmas theme, so good job on that. Time for judgment.

Music: 8 Good trance mix, did you create it yourself of is it a track you got from someone else? Either way its good.
Animation: 7 Seems like you have some experience with this so, I would have to say its good.
Length: 5 Could of made it longer, but like you said in your movie your tablet stopped working.
Overall: 6.6 = 7

Score: 6

"Its ok"

submission: Mitta on Starryland

date: December 28, 2009

I like the idea of the game but the approach of it was a little lacking. For one the controls, having to move the mouse and use the arrow keys to move the character is a little taxing. If you used the ASWD keys it would of been a lot better. So your judgment.

Gameplay: 5 Just because of the controls
Music: 6 A little to repetitive
Game Design: 7 Is ment to be played by someone of the younger audiance, simple game design.
Overall: 6

Score: 10

"Love the game"

submission: Chaos Chamber

date: December 1, 2009

I really love this game, and i do agree with everyone else add some sort of challenge mode to it, also have different music, sometimes the same song gets a little boring. So good i made it to level 23 BEST GAME EVER!!!!!

Score: 10

"Fucking awesome"

submission: CW: Down to earth Pt1

date: November 4, 2009

For some reason this reminds me of Fooly Cooly, And Cowboy Bebop.

Score: 10

"lol"

submission: Tiddlywank

date: October 21, 2009

that pretty funny, i wanted to see IT OVER 9000!!!!

Score: 8

"Good game"

submission: Ripples

date: October 12, 2009

But add a health bar

Score: 9

"For some reason"

submission: //Necropolis Xenophobe

date: October 11, 2009

It reminds me of the Boondocks.

Score: 10

"Finally!!!!!"

submission: Super Mario bros Z ep.8

date: October 9, 2009

Thi shit is awesome.... i do love the numerous Star Fox references that you put in there... "Do a Barrel Roll!!" priceless. This is the perfect series, I hope this gets picked up and turned into a game.